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I tried Diana aswell…but man. There are some major gaps here that i just can’t make out!
Anyway…->
Did you really think you had it in you all this time
Is your “…” still valid, voice still clear, do your words still rhime?
“are your…………………………..is your…………………..sublime”
Sticks and stones and broken bones, just “steal the night”
You don’t matter, No you don’t
You’re jus a “once was”. Move on
“………………” get with the program, with the flow
Just a “has been”, you really should know
It’s a filthy habit, hard to break but tougher to keep
But the other choices haunt your dreams and steal your sleep
If it’s one for the money, then it’s two for the show
“……” free for all and all for the blow!
You don’t matter, No you don’t
You’re jus a “once was”. Move on
“………………” get with the program, with the flow
Just a “has been”, you really should know!
Good work Wulf! Although i would change the phrase “Where is nowhere else
I’m forever free” with “There is nowhere else i would rather be” plus a few other phrases
Something like this:
Stoned and blissful
I know what I like
Have you seen her
She shines so bright
Free means being free
Of the need to feel free
There is nowhere else
i would rather be
Sweet surrender
My time was due
Nothin made me feel
Like I’m supposed to do
Tired seeker I was
Back to the world
Wish fulfillment
Hidden in a girl
How could I take it that long
I was lost like a Cork on the open shore (?)
It made me floating along
I was free but I had no motion(?)
Life is pure magic when you
Finally get it right
All I wanted was
To feel close to you
I won’t push it far
You do what you need to
Soul and fire
Can I still be your friend
When it’s over
And we’re free to float along
And wonder why we’re free
I want you to be my girl
I want you to be my girl
But i could be wrong
well there are probably dozens of mistakes here and there on Mr. Victim. For instance…the whole ending is pure guessing. And i listened to it last night, and what i’ve written sounds terribly incorrect. But i think i’m right regarding the swan song phrase (Here’s a note from Wikipedia: The phrase “swan song” is a reference to an ancient belief that the Mute Swan (Cygnus olor) is completely mute during its lifetime until the moment just before it dies, when it sings one beautiful song)’
Just to follow up what you said about who wrote what: Snah has always been rather cryptic when it comes to lyrics. So the phraze “we sing along enchanted by thew swan song” isn’t that far fetched if you ask me. It fits! And regarding the Seephing phrase…it’s supposed to be seething.
As for COTF i actually think i’m right with the “shake us up” phrase. It rhimes with “Break it up” too. Or else it would have to be “shake a soul” and that doesen’t sound right.
Anyway…we need more ppl in on this!
Ok So here’s my take on Child of the Future
Soul Shaker, Shake us up
Show us the grooves
Heartbreaker, break it up
And show us “new moves”
Dope dealer, give us “Dope” or “Grow”
And grant us “reprize”
Faith Dealer give us hope
Teach us how to believe
Child of the future
Please be kind, provide us “all that fire” to help put it right
Child of the future
Let them all know you won’t be denied,
It’s your world my friend, and i won’t pretend to have an answer
Soul Brother, be afraid or “Be a friend”
Show us the way
Earth Mother keep us safe
Each and every day
Child of the future
Please make sure to bring us soul and fire to help put things straiught
Child of the future
Let them all know you won’t be denied, Don’t let it slide
Child of the future
Let them all know you won’t be denied. “Come on find a flag”
Child of the future
It’s up to you to bring them soul and fire
“…” your makers
The “…” minds the takers
Please don’t be denied
NOTE: The ” parts are words i’m not sure about. So please. If anybody’s got ideas, then step right up!
Good work man! But i’ve got some changes to Mr Victim :
One last laugh
and the rules of attraction change
One little lie
grow to myriads of escapist trades
Now we’re busy grinding diamonds into dust
Seems like lifetimes spent without a thought, seephing with disgust
Some things never change, they stay the same
Mr Victim takes the blame
Two for the road stumbling blindly to the minefield of the heart
Two lost souls beg for mercy as they rip it all apart
Now we’re busy grinding diamonds into dust
Seems like lifetimes spendt without a thought, seephing with disgust
Some things never change, but all the same
We sing along enchanted by the swan song
Finally realizing that the thrill is gone
There’s no turning back!
Now we’re busy grinding diamonds into dust
Seems like lifetimes spent without a thought, seephing with disgust
Some things never change, they stay the same
Mr. Victim takes the blame but all the same …… (?)
We sing along enchanted by the swan song all so terrible and compromized
We sing along enchanted by the swan song “while our heads are joined and terrorized”
No escape from Victim “tricks”, stranger gets so “terrorsick”
The anger that it agrivates, the painkiller convail our self destruct
Still a few blanks. I’m gonna take a closer headphone listen tomorrow, but i think we’re on to something here!
By the way…i think your right regarding who wrote what!
hah funny story here…
The recordplayer i used to rip the album spun the record too fast, and after listening to the review from NRK2 i found that my ripped version plays a semi-tone higher in the registry then the original. And thus the whole album plays abit faster. Perhaps that’s why i found it so god damn rocky!!
Anyway gonna tune the songs down, so they match the true speed.
Still love it by the way! Even The Waiting Game is starting to grow on me.
Here’s the review, recorded and converted to MP3 (Norwegian)
Contains snippets of The Ozzylot, Cornucopia, Demon Box and The Mirror and The Lie
https://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=batch_download&batch_id=YkxLL0dBT01ubVd4dnc9PQ
Although i wouldn’t refer to them as “fuzz Soup”, i understand what you’re sayong, and i miss it too! The Mellotron is such a powerful instrument (which i use regularly myself), and i bet that it would have lifted the songs even more! But the piano is cool too!
